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    The Ontogo Small Tote Bag draws inspiration from the classic Sac Plat handbag from 1968 and features a miniature version of the Giant Bicolor Monogram pattern embossed on Monogram Imprente leather,??? Store daily needs such as iPad Mini. Flexible handles and detachable shoulder straps offer a wide range of carrying options.



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    The NeverfullMM Louis Vuitton's NeverfullMM bag is a must-have bag for OL girls. It is also made of DamierAzur fabric. The wallet is attached to the side and the shape of the bag can be adjusted freely. The large design has a detachable zipper pocket, making it easy to store essential items when going out!



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    The NeverfullMM Louis Vuitton's NeverfullMM bag is a must-have bag for OL girls. It is also made of DamierAzur fabric. The wallet is attached to the side and the shape of the bag can be adjusted freely. The large design has a detachable zipper pocket, making it easy to store essential items when going out!



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    Daphne: This series of bags is truly a classic among classics, and they are also extremely popular in 2023. They are retro and fashionable, durable and durable. Perfect for casual occasions. Old Flower Saddle Bag: Old Flower Saddle Bag is a popular model of the LV 2023 new model, featuring old flower patterns paired with soft suede, showcasing a low-key fashion sense. Round cake bun: Round cake bun is another popular LV style, with a soft feel and cute appearance, making it the favorite of many little sisters. Speedy Pillow Bag: With a round pillow design and a stylish color scheme, it is easy to fit and can hold power banks, sunglasses, wallets, etc. It is very suitable for office workers to use. Neonoe bucket bag: This bag has always been a classic among classics since its launch, retro and elegant, coupled with vintage colors, making it even easier to match and can be carried all year round. Medium size is more popular in the second-hand market! New Size Mahjong Bag: This air cushion mahjong bag is the new version of LV 2023, featuring a retro design and a checkerboard pattern. It is fashionable and practical, making it perfect for casual occasions.



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    The NeoNo e MM bucket bag has a beautiful and generous design, making it a hot bag every summer, attracting many girls to get started! Louis Vuitton's new N e oNo e MM is made of DamierAzur canvas material and adorned with a sea breeze shoulder strap and chain, exuding a stylish summer vacation vibe! The wallet can be opened and closed through a shoulder strap, and the length of the strap can also be adjusted, making you more flexible!



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    In addition, the package also comes with a small change wallet and chain strap, which can be directly carried with the money and change, or used separately, with a cost-effectiveness of up to 100%! Louis Vuitton has just led fashion fans to take a look at the beauty of Seoul. Not only are guests gathered at the early autumn runway, but the bags are also eye-catching. This time, Meiyang Haigou Bouluxury is focusing on the bags, let's take a look at the fashionable bags at the 2023 early autumn show, and be prepared to leave in the second half of the year! Before the show, Tai Yan, the captain of the brand ambassador Girls'Generation, and Hyein, a member of NewJeans, came to hang their bags first, and then they could see the stiff bags in their hands reappear on the show in the autumn of 2023. With brown LV old flowers in two different colors, they can not only be used as handbags, but also be carried on the back with chains. It must be a key package that can not be ignored in the second half of the year! In the autumn and winter 2023 series displayed at the Paris Fashion Week in March this year, Louis Vuitton made a bag with the name of Paris in the form of a hard shell package to show the core value of the brand's deep cultivation in Paris, France. This time, he came to Seoul to hold a show, changing the city name on the package to "Seoul", not only to name this time, but also to come to Seoul, South Korea, It also symbolizes Seoul's visibility and influence as an international city, highlighting the brand's perhaps closer relationship with this city. As a fashion brand with nearly 170 years of brand history, apart from the classic "Speedy" and "Capsines", there are always a few styles that fashion fans miss out on and are very gripping. This time, creative director Nicolas Ghesqui e re reviewed the works of autumn and winter 2016, giving this "Atlantis" bag a chance to return to the stage. The loose lines on the bag shape and the handle are also used to present it differently from others. In a mid size and mini style on the runway, he is preparing to once again capture the hearts of fashionable girls! In the early spring of 2023, creative director Nicolas Ghesqui e re had a brainstorm to soften the hard shell travel bag. The originally upright bag shape, when replaced with other structures, became naturally sagging in the middle, while there were still leather edges and metal decorations on the side of the suitcase, presenting the conflict between rigidity and softness on the same package. In this early autumn series, You can see this "soft version suitcase" package, replaced with red and bright black, with different postures, once again catching the attention of fashion fans, and it also makes people estimate whether the "Side Trunk" will become a new classic?



    louis vuitton repair bags - louis vuitton repair bags 25/05/08(Thu) 23:16 No.328869 163.53.18.36

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    At the Louis Vuitton 2023 early autumn women's fashion show held at the landmark diving bridge in Seoul, South Korea, Nicolas Ghesqui e re, the brand's artistic director for women's clothing, brought us many fashionable designs. The LV series's items were also trendy on May 19th, Many of the handbags have been replaced with new clothes called "Navy Blue". Portable Small Luggage | Side TrunkLV This stylish design of the Side Trunk handbag was created by the brand's women's fashion art director, Nicolas Ghesquiere, who reinterpreted the brand's classic suitcase and transformed it into a portable small suitcase. This newly debuted Side Trunk is replaced with "Navy Blue" and is made of Monogram canvas, combined with cotton and gold and silver threads to create a glossy layered bag body with a futuristic illusion effect. It comes with a carrying bag and shoulder straps, allowing you to change the way you carry it for different occasions. Cousin PM.



    louis vuitton vintage wallet - louis vuitton vintage wallet 25/05/08(Thu) 22:54 No.328868 163.53.18.36

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    The NeoNo e MM bucket bag has a beautiful and generous design, making it a hot bag every summer, attracting many girls to get started! Louis Vuitton's new N e oNo e MM is made of DamierAzur canvas material and adorned with a sea breeze shoulder strap and chain, exuding a stylish summer vacation vibe! The wallet can be opened and closed through a shoulder strap, and the length of the strap can also be adjusted, making you more flexible!



    louis vuitton luggage bag - louis vuitton luggage bag 25/05/08(Thu) 22:51 No.328867 163.53.18.36

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    Louis Vuitton NANO BUCKET handbag Imagine strolling on the streets of Lisbon, dreaming by the swimming pool, or feeling the delicate and warm touch of the sand under your feet. The latest LV BY THE POOL series from Louis Vuitton perfectly renders the light and bright impression and lively atmosphere of summer vacation onto multiple classic handbag works.



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    The small mahjong bag has a small capacity, but its shape is cute and very suitable for daily pairing, suitable for small and delicate girls. The new Neverfull: As the name suggests, it's never enough! This bag has a large capacity. It can hold mobile phones, iPads, air cushions, powder, books, etc. It also has light weight and adjustable shoulder straps, which can meet the needs of people of different heights. Recently, the new season series of major brand bags have been put on the shelves, and the major brand LV bags with both Fashion design and practicality must not be missed! The latest LV By The Pool series brings fresh and soft colors to the design, echoing the long summer atmosphere of freehand brushwork. It adds a lightweight and elegant unique shape to the classic LV bag, making each design exude an elegant summer charm, which is very worth collecting! 2023 Brand Bag Recommendation


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