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    At the Louis Vuitton 2023 early autumn women's fashion show held at the landmark diving bridge in Seoul, South Korea, Nicolas Ghesqui e re, the brand's artistic director for women's clothing, brought us many fashionable designs. The LV series's items were also trendy on May 19th, Many of the handbags have been replaced with new clothes called "Navy Blue". Portable Small Luggage | Side TrunkLV This stylish design of the Side Trunk handbag was created by the brand's women's fashion art director, Nicolas Ghesquiere, who reinterpreted the brand's classic suitcase and transformed it into a portable small suitcase. This newly debuted Side Trunk is replaced with "Navy Blue" and is made of Monogram canvas, combined with cotton and gold and silver threads to create a glossy layered bag body with a futuristic illusion effect. It comes with a carrying bag and shoulder straps, allowing you to change the way you carry it for different occasions. Cousin PM.



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