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    The Micro M e tis chain bag is made of Monogram canvas and condenses the classic configuration of the Pochette M e tis handbag in a pocket size. The handle is made of cow leather, and the S-lock lock is derived from the traditional Louis Vuitton hard box. Removable chain provides a trendy carrying option, suitable for day and night occasions



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    The New Wave Multi Pochette handbag features a clever design crafted from quilted cow leather. Wide shoulder strap embroidered brand logo, fixed circular zero wallet with spring buckle, paired with a chain that can be carried or short shoulder back.



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    The Twist Medium handbag is made of grain Epi leather and continues its iconic design with LV Twist twist locks. The chain and enamel decoration are derived from classic padlocks, slowly exuding a soft and beautiful atmosphere. Detached and adjustable shoulder straps for easy shoulder to shoulder or crossbody use



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    In this series, the Nano Bucket mini bucket bag, which has been reinterpreted and given an elegant and unrestrained new style, is made of natural pure cotton with a new material similar to Lafite grass, paired with black leather and Monogram old flower embroidery patterns, instantly exuding charming charm, making the bag present rich and innovative ideas while lingering a meaningful atmosphere. As an old flower bag controller, I really can't refuse it! Although it is a Nano sized package, the upright cylindrical body with a single spacious compartment provides perfect storage space for daily needs. Whether it is a long wallet, phone, or various small items, it can be easily placed, making it very easy to fit.



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    The NeoNo e MM bucket bag has a beautiful and generous design, making it a hot bag every summer, attracting many girls to get started! Louis Vuitton's new N e oNo e MM is made of DamierAzur canvas material and adorned with a sea breeze shoulder strap and chain, exuding a stylish summer vacation vibe! The wallet can be opened and closed through a shoulder strap, and the length of the strap can also be adjusted, making you more flexible!



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    This LV bag is also equipped with two adjustable length leather handles and a detachable leather long shoulder strap, which can meet all daily carrying needs whether it is handheld, hand held, or sloping back, and presents a completely different wearing style!



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    In addition, the package also comes with a small change wallet and chain strap, which can be directly carried with the money and change, or used separately, with a cost-effectiveness of up to 100%! Louis Vuitton has just led fashion fans to take a look at the beauty of Seoul. Not only are guests gathered at the early autumn runway, but the bags are also eye-catching. This time, Meiyang Haigou Bouluxury is focusing on the bags, let's take a look at the fashionable bags at the 2023 early autumn show, and be prepared to leave in the second half of the year! Before the show, Tai Yan, the captain of the brand ambassador Girls'Generation, and Hyein, a member of NewJeans, came to hang their bags first, and then they could see the stiff bags in their hands reappear on the show in the autumn of 2023. With brown LV old flowers in two different colors, they can not only be used as handbags, but also be carried on the back with chains. It must be a key package that can not be ignored in the second half of the year! In the autumn and winter 2023 series displayed at the Paris Fashion Week in March this year, Louis Vuitton made a bag with the name of Paris in the form of a hard shell package to show the core value of the brand's deep cultivation in Paris, France. This time, he came to Seoul to hold a show, changing the city name on the package to "Seoul", not only to name this time, but also to come to Seoul, South Korea, It also symbolizes Seoul's visibility and influence as an international city, highlighting the brand's perhaps closer relationship with this city. As a fashion brand with nearly 170 years of brand history, apart from the classic "Speedy" and "Capsines", there are always a few styles that fashion fans miss out on and are very gripping. This time, creative director Nicolas Ghesqui e re reviewed the works of autumn and winter 2016, giving this "Atlantis" bag a chance to return to the stage. The loose lines on the bag shape and the handle are also used to present it differently from others. In a mid size and mini style on the runway, he is preparing to once again capture the hearts of fashionable girls! In the early spring of 2023, creative director Nicolas Ghesqui e re had a brainstorm to soften the hard shell travel bag. The originally upright bag shape, when replaced with other structures, became naturally sagging in the middle, while there were still leather edges and metal decorations on the side of the suitcase, presenting the conflict between rigidity and softness on the same package. In this early autumn series, You can see this "soft version suitcase" package, replaced with red and bright black, with different postures, once again catching the attention of fashion fans, and it also makes people estimate whether the "Side Trunk" will become a new classic?



    new louis vuitton heels - new louis vuitton heels 25/05/09(Fri) 09:17 No.328908 163.53.18.36

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    This LV bag is also equipped with two adjustable length leather handles and a detachable leather long shoulder strap, which can meet all daily carrying needs whether it is handheld, hand held, or sloping back, and presents a completely different wearing style!



    louis vuitton fashion show 2012 - louis vuitton fashion show 2012 25/05/09(Fri) 09:06 No.328907 163.53.18.36

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    In this series, the Nano Bucket mini bucket bag, which has been reinterpreted and given an elegant and unrestrained new style, is made of natural pure cotton with a new material similar to Lafite grass, paired with black leather and Monogram old flower embroidery patterns, instantly exuding charming charm, making the bag present rich and innovative ideas while lingering a meaningful atmosphere. As an old flower bag controller, I really can't refuse it! Although it is a Nano sized package, the upright cylindrical body with a single spacious compartment provides perfect storage space for daily needs. Whether it is a long wallet, phone, or various small items, it can be easily placed, making it very easy to fit.



    louis vuitton lv277 - louis vuitton lv277 25/05/09(Fri) 08:58 No.328906 163.53.18.36

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    Capuchines MM tweed × The tassel Capuchines MM handbag is made of navy blue tweed material and measures W31.5 in size × H20 × D11 cm, with detachable wide shoulder straps, available in various wearing methods such as handheld, shoulder back, and diagonal back. On the flip of the handbag, the exquisite Monogram flower pattern is displayed generously, and the combination of gold and navy blue presents a modern and fashionable high-end atmosphere. The flip can also be inserted into the bag to reveal the golden tone LV abbreviation letter. The Capuchines BB handbag is woven with beige, white, and gold raffite, cotton ribbons, exquisite beige tweeds, bright color blocks, and tassel trims to bring a cool feeling to the summer. The flip, handle, and shoulder strap are all made of beige grain Taurillon leather, paired with gold hardware, showcasing the unique beauty of the Louis Vuitton classic Capuchines BB handbag. The main body, flap, and shoulder straps of the Louis Vuitton Capsines MM bag are made of grain Taurillon leather in a contrasting color block style. The juxtaposition of blue and white adds a delicate touch to this classic style. Especially for the handle part, it features LV abbreviation and gem like enamel handle bracket. The stunning color scheme of gentle pink and beige is a healing bag hidden in the Louis Vuitton handbag area. Taurillon leather and pink ostrich leather trim fully showcase the warm tone texture. The interior compartment has a zippered pocket, and the spacious interior bag can also accommodate many daily items. The Capcuines BB handbag is made of full-grain Taurillon leather with different colors, and together with woven chain shoulder straps, it adds a sweet and charming atmosphere to the handbag. The straight configuration and curved handle complement each other, whether it is folded in or placed on the outside, making it a beautiful scenery for you to follow. The Capuchines Mini handbag is attractive with its playful design and bright colors, featuring a combination of popular colors such as bright lemon green and pink, as well as a white LV body buckle, making it perfect for pairing with summer looks. Equipped with a detachable contrasting color chain, the most practical bag is available with a sloping back, side back, and one hold!


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