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    Louis Vuitton NANO BUCKET handbag Imagine strolling on the streets of Lisbon, dreaming by the swimming pool, or feeling the delicate and warm touch of the sand under your feet. The latest LV BY THE POOL series from Louis Vuitton perfectly renders the light and bright impression and lively atmosphere of summer vacation onto multiple classic handbag works.



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    The Pochette Cousin is made of soft sheepskin material, with a main color tone of cream and a pink Monogram embossed pattern for decoration. Coupled with a soft body, it looks soft and healing! The bag is equipped with detachable metal chain straps, adding durability. At the same time, it also provides diverse clothing choices for girls. Not only can it be used as a bag, but it can also be used as a shoulder strap or waist bag! SpeedyBandouli e re25 This time, the brand has replaced the usual SpeedyBandouli e re25 with DamierAzur fabric, featuring ocean style prints and a chain strap made of five color mesh and shoulder straps, making the bag feel relaxed. Adopting the brand's classic tooling silhouette, paired with natural cowhide decoration, elegant and elegant!



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    Daphne: This series of bags is truly a classic among classics, and they are also extremely popular in 2023. They are retro and fashionable, durable and durable. Perfect for casual occasions. Old Flower Saddle Bag: Old Flower Saddle Bag is a popular model of the LV 2023 new model, featuring old flower patterns paired with soft suede, showcasing a low-key fashion sense. Round cake bun: Round cake bun is another popular LV style, with a soft feel and cute appearance, making it the favorite of many little sisters. Speedy Pillow Bag: With a round pillow design and a stylish color scheme, it is easy to fit and can hold power banks, sunglasses, wallets, etc. It is very suitable for office workers to use. Neonoe bucket bag: This bag has always been a classic among classics since its launch, retro and elegant, coupled with vintage colors, making it even easier to match and can be carried all year round. Medium size is more popular in the second-hand market! New Size Mahjong Bag: This air cushion mahjong bag is the new version of LV 2023, featuring a retro design and a checkerboard pattern. It is fashionable and practical, making it perfect for casual occasions.



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    The NeverfullMM Louis Vuitton's NeverfullMM bag is a must-have bag for OL girls. It is also made of DamierAzur fabric. The wallet is attached to the side and the shape of the bag can be adjusted freely. The large design has a detachable zipper pocket, making it easy to store essential items when going out!



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    The Pochette Cousin is made of soft sheepskin material, with a main color tone of cream and a pink Monogram embossed pattern for decoration. Coupled with a soft body, it looks soft and healing! The bag is equipped with detachable metal chain straps, adding durability. At the same time, it also provides diverse clothing choices for girls. Not only can it be used as a bag, but it can also be used as a shoulder strap or waist bag! SpeedyBandouli e re25 This time, the brand has replaced the usual SpeedyBandouli e re25 with DamierAzur fabric, featuring ocean style prints and a chain strap made of five color mesh and shoulder straps, making the bag feel relaxed. Adopting the brand's classic tooling silhouette, paired with natural cowhide decoration, elegant and elegant!



    louis vuitton handbag - louis vuitton handbag 25/05/09(Fri) 01:25 No.328880 163.53.18.36

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    Louis Vuitton's early spring 2023 handbag and fashion week surprise debuted, and the new handbag is even more eye-catching, reshaping the classic. Interpreting contemporary trends, creating a summer shimmering background with a full aura.



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    At the Louis Vuitton Resort 2023 show, Eileen Gu came out with this bag, which really blew up!



    buy louis vuitton wallet - buy louis vuitton wallet 25/05/09(Fri) 01:01 No.328878 163.53.18.36

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    The Micro M e tis chain bag is made of Monogram canvas and condenses the classic configuration of the Pochette M e tis handbag in a pocket size. The handle is made of cow leather, and the S-lock lock is derived from the traditional Louis Vuitton hard box. Removable chain provides a trendy carrying option, suitable for day and night occasions



    louis vuitton pre owned purse - louis vuitton pre owned purse 25/05/09(Fri) 01:00 No.328877 163.53.18.36

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    If you prefer softer designs, the stylish design of the LV "Pillow Bag" Cousin PM is a list you can refer to. In this early autumn 2023 women's clothing collection, it has also been replaced with a "Navy Blue" with illusion effect, allowing it to shine with different glosses from different angles, making it even more charming. The LV Pochette M e tis East West is also made from the new clothing in this series, the navy blue Monogram canvas. The storage space in the handbag is just right for the iPhone 14 phone, and there is also a zippered storage space on the back, allowing you to fit all your needs. In addition, this handbag can be carried in three ways: leather handle, detachable chain strap, and detachable and adjustable length leather shoulder strap, allowing you to use it freely. LV has a cute "makeup bag" Micro Vanity, and this time it also debuted in a new illusion Navy blue dress. The small size is also very suitable for the design. The details are paired with gold metal chains and zippers to add a luxurious atmosphere. The Speedy Bandouli e re 20, which has always been popular with LV, has also put on new clothes for it this time. Replace the body of the bag with illusion Navy blue, and the handle is decorated with Navy blue, bringing a neat and uniform visual effect. It also gives you a fashionable option to purchase different designs. With the return of Pragmatism, the high-capacity "Tote Bag" returns to everyone's favorite embrace, and the Neverfull MM in Louis Vuitton has always been loved by everyone! LV's new color exudes a different fashionable atmosphere, and you can also refer to it if you want to purchase a "practical" beginner bag! For those who love traveling, you can also purchase a stylish travel bag, such as the LV Keepall Bandouli e re 45, which is also a direction to consider. It allows you to carry all the necessary items when traveling, and there are detachable luggage tags adorned above, adding its fashionable charm and keeping you fashionable while traveling!



    louis vuitton briefcases bags - louis vuitton briefcases bags 25/05/09(Fri) 00:51 No.328876 163.53.18.36

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    Speedy 25: This bag is one of LV's most popular styles, loved by fashion enthusiasts for its classic shape and fashionable design. The Speedy 25 comes in multiple sizes to choose from, suitable for different occasions and needs. Book Tote: This bag is one of the most popular styles of LV and is loved by travelers for its fashionable appearance and comfortable design. Book Tote has multiple sizes to choose from, suitable for different occasions and needs. Canvas: Canvas is the latest style launched by LV, loved by consumers for its fashionable appearance and durability. Canvas has a variety of sizes to choose from, suitable for different occasions and needs. Louis Vuitton started with luggage and is also quite familiar with how to create exquisite and perfect handbags. Meiyang Haigou Bouluxury today brought the Louis Vuitton Capsines handbag launched by LV in 2013, named after Rue Neuve des Capsines, a Paris street store that opened its first specialized store in 1854. Today, it has become one of the most representative handbags of the brand. Golden Globe winner Zendaya not only serves as the brand ambassador, but also as the spokesperson for the handbag, Witness the graceful style of Zendaya and handbag. In the summer of 2023, Louis Vuitton once again released a new color scheme for the Capuchine handbag! Louis Vuitton Capsines handbag new color scheme


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